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Old Parking Lot

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In the parking lot
padded thickly with snow:
a worn pink sock,
its crooked smile
drawn with marker

surrounded
by icy valleys, pockmarks,
footprints from the crushing
of unseeing boots
This piece is for the August Workshop at Writers' Workshop! Link: shadowedacolyte.deviantart.com…

*Edited! Following the suggestions of my wonderful commenters, I've added some more backstory and changed some things up. A HUGE thank you to all of the people who gave feedback!*

I admire poets who use lots of abstract language, but I find that I enjoy writing in Willams' style much more. Thank you so much to this workshop for helping me discover that! Originally, this was going to be about a lost glove, but I decided to make it more interesting.

Please feel free to comment/critique!
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Auxuris's avatar
vivid personification! ^^